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Halp me with mah art.

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what should I add/should I add anything to this?

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it's supposed to be kevin shields destroying himself with the holocaust, but I don't know if that would be easily translated through this. probably not.
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I'm not sure i like the description, but painting is really nice.
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mff wrote:I'm not sure i like the description


first of all sorry if I have offended you. :(

2. if you are not a fan of my bloody valentine then I can see why you might find it offensive. they end their shows with 40 min. of feedback and noise, which they dub "the holocaust".

3. thank you
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maybe above the shadow of shields you could have a bit of a shadow of the holocaust???

but i would hate for you to do that and have it not be as cool as it is now....

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smile_man wrote:
mff wrote:I'm not sure i like the description


first of all sorry if I have offended you. :(

2. if you are not a fan of my bloody valentine then I can see why you might find it offensive. they end their shows with 40 min. of feedback and noise, which they dub "the holocaust".

3. thank you
Hahaha, no man, i'm a big fan of MBV. I didn't find it offensive in any way.

I never new about their ending and them calling it holocaust. It's fine by me, anyway. I've never seen them myself - wich is not really fine by me.

But sure, the desription makes much more sence now! :D

I think it's much more general - me not liking descriptions for paintings. I'm more the i-want-to-decide-for-myself-what-the-painting-looks-like-kinda-guy.

But really, it's nice. I'd hang it on my wall :) I'd say leave it for now ;)
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iblamesummers wrote:add SEMEN.

:joy:


I rubbed lube on another piece I did!

ever heard of Dash Snow?
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all in all looks good...the only thing is that explosion-like-thing in the bottom left corner doesn't really fit with rest of the image...it looks like it was done by a different hand. If you could get that explosion to tie in a bit more I think you'd have yourself a finished piece!

-EDIT- ooh, and maybe little glowing red dots for the amp jewels :evil:
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I agree, bigger explosion. Over all it reminds me of thermal rays/human shadows from Hiroshima.
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my bloody television wrote: If you could get that explosion to tie in a bit more


how so?
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smile_man wrote:
my bloody television wrote: If you could get that explosion to tie in a bit more


how so?


a bit of a shadow above the figure? :idk:
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magiclawnchair wrote:a bit of a shadow above the figure? :idk:


:(

:mope:

that's what the big black/gray thing behind him was supposed to be.
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smile_man wrote:
magiclawnchair wrote:a bit of a shadow above the figure? :idk:


:(

:mope:

that's what the big black/gray thing behind him was supposed to be.


hey, i like it the way it is! :love:
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smile_man wrote:
my bloody television wrote: If you could get that explosion to tie in a bit more


how so?


layer man. maybe cover up most of it again with black, then go in with the white again and really build it up, attack it!
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I'm more the i-want-to-decide-for-myself-what-the-painting-looks-like-kinda-guy.


I believed that art and music should have no explanation.

Nice painting

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