help me decide on artwork for upcomming release

[oinkbanana]

I'm looking for comments on layout, technique, color selection, outlines.. etc. I'm pretty set on the font and its form, though I'm not married to the colors or size. The music is electro driven pop songs (verse, chorus, verse, chorus bridge, chorus outro) hidden behind a chaotic hailstorm of extreme frequencies, so I'd like the cover to be simple.

you can download 3 sample tunes here http://www.mediafire.com/?rdzlldeefdzb4
but if you don't want to download you can just take a peak at a track from last years album here

here's what I got so far:
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rip me to shreads so I come out of this with something decent.


and the bunny ears is because i'd wear bunny ears when performing...

[jfrey]

Had a few thoughts. Figured I'd draw them up.

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[Mudfuzz]

I couldn't resist...

[oinkbanana]

is neat and tidy better?

[Mudfuzz]

I like it better
I would LOVE to see at comic book/enlarged magazine print effect on it..

[oinkbanana]

like this:?

[oinkbanana]

a little brighter, and no comic book effect on the letter outlines

[Mudfuzz]

I like it, but I am me so... grain of salt...

[jfrey]

I like it brighter, but I think you should keep the effect on the letter lines.

[hazelwould]

is neat and tidy better?

I like this. But can you take the filters off of the woman?

[oinkbanana]

^^ which filters are you talking about? that she's made up of 6 lavels of hues? do you prefer the First pic of her (where the levels are generally just messier, but its' the same effect)
edit: like this????





I like the comic book effect for this. it's a good suggestion.

is the eating guy a better subject?

[oinkbanana]

is a border too fancy?


is she sexier in green/yellow?



anyhow, gnight for now. will play more tomorrow.
I will shop every suggestion.

[theavondon]

I really like the "sorry" one.

[oinkbanana]

is she better like this:?

[theavondon]

I honestly dig it more without the comic effect. But, I'm just some jackass anyway.