Original Poem: Thief

[Ghost Hip]

I write quite often, and this came out last night and I usually like all my poetry, but this one I'm pretty jazzed about. any comments, questions, thoughts, etc. are welcome.

She is a good girl
She never had it
Brought up on tilt o' whirls
She had to stop it

Now she's a rebel
Not a dreamer
She has a shot gun
But she ran out of shells

He's gonna get it
As soon as she screams
You're a liar
A bloody thief
You're A bloody thief
You're A bloody thief

Now there's a hole
In your heart
Dug it out with her nails
So she could stick something in it

You'll never steal from me again, she said
You'll never steal
You'll never feel this kiss again, she said
As if you even feel at all

"This ain't a conversation"
She said as she taped over his mouth
She said "I'll never let you go"

So as she took off her clothes
She stole all the blood from his bones
As she took off her clothes
She began to let him go

[1,2,3, Pull Out!]

That could make a really sweet song!!

[Ghost Hip]

That could make a really sweet song!!

Thank yas! I'm working on it. I have the riffs down.....I just need to figure out what fuzz sound to use....

[veteransdaypoppy]

psh, then you only did the easy stuff!

[Ghost Hip]

haha, yeah the room mate has been in all day so I kind of keep from playing my electric too much. So I just picked up the acoustic and worked it out. Tomorrow I should be able to bust loose.

[Blurillaz]

*copy and paste for english assignment*

[Ghost Hip]

*copy and paste for english assignment*

Oh Noez! Copyright fail!

[Blurillaz]

*copy and paste for english assignment*

Oh Noez! Copyright fail!

Yeah, Teacher, I wrote it all. It was a moment of pure genius. Oh, Jared.... When did you get here?