NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)

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NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)

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Alright so WaveForm was trying to get pose ideas for a nude photoshoot he's doing.... and I sketched one. And I got inspired to make a full drawing, but I've never drawn a woman, let alone a naked woman. so I tried anyways....

I used this pic for reference by Semyaza (hyperion artist) just to get a feel for the woman's body. http://yhwh-semyaza.deviantart.com/art/ ... 2-92107207 I ended up with something a bit different though thankfully, but as you can see the hair and face have very similar features. I had trouble with the left (her left) nipple placement.... but as you can see its not finished.

so give me some feedback. :) Just looking for tips and advice because I'm enjoying this so far. :joy:

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The titz are very well drawn, in all seriousness. I think it needs more depth, shade away!

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Haha sure, after the shading! ;)
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Alright updated.... the boobs are kind of.....awkward now that I've outlined them....hopefully I can fix that.
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Hips and legs are a little awkward and flat, hand is a little small, lines need a little smoothing. But it looks like it's going to work out well so just keep tweaking.
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Smile_min reminded me to point out she wearing a skirt, juts in case someone got the impression of whacky legs. Thanks for tips mud, the hand is a bit small.
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Agree with the hands, and the arm seems to taper to quickly.

Maybe if the wrap of the skirt went the opposite direction.
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Great start!

My baisc things have already been said... after the elbow, arm gets small, same with hand.

Nothin else, really.
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