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Lemme know what you think so far :

Second take with full lyrics (after my voice was shot to hell)
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/deviever/after-the-first-ship-sinks-full-devi-scratch-vox[/soundcloud]

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vox / lyrics by devi ever

she's alive to
she's allowed you to
violate every orifice
but you choose to break her bones

:omg:

abused, you
pretend to
believe in the two of us
because we fucked like no other

pretend all you want to
but you fucked up
make amends to all you wanted
cuz you fucked up

listen to the words I'm saying
your life is worth less than nothing
at all
nothing at all

- - -

she said bleed me all your flowers
with eyes inside the lies the lies the lies
kick apart these burning towers
made of sand, and cum, and blood, and tears, and the pieces of me I broke down for you all these years

:omg:

and you can pretend all you want to
but you fucked up
make amends to all you wanted
cuz you fucked up

listen to the words I'm saying
your life is worth less than nothing
listen to the words I'm saying
your life is worth less than nothing
at all
nothing at all


Here's the first take with just first half of lyrics (before my voice was shot to hell)
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/deviever/after-the-first-ship-sinks-deviscratchvox[/soundcloud]
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Sounds great, you got a great sound there. :thumb:
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Raw & rocking! Nicely done.

I'd love to hear you two trade off vox sometime (not necessarily in this song, maybe in a later collab). I think your voices would be pretty badass together.
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Fuckin' Badass.
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jrmy wrote:Raw & rocking! Nicely done.

I'd love to hear you two trade off vox sometime (not necessarily in this song, maybe in a later collab). I think your voices would be pretty badass together.


That is the plan. I'm hoping he likes what I did with this... just handed it off to me last night... WAKE UP FUCKER!

I think I'd probably drop just about anything I'm doing right now to be in a band with Jared. :hobbes:
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devi ever wrote:I think I'd probably drop just about anything I'm doing right now to be in a band with Jared. :hobbes:


I have often felt that way as well, but I don't think he needs a bass player. At least you actually get to collaborate with him!
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DIG! :omg:
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Add noisey guitar soloing at end part of song.
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mauerkraut wrote:Add noisey guitar soloing at end part of song.


Word. I plan on adding a third fuzzy guitar for leads and such. :)
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this is cool. sexy lyrics ;)
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I quite :joy: this.
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Didn't see you post this here!

Glad you guys like it, one of my recorded tracks that I loved but never had any vocals for. It's awesome to hear it with devi's vocals, made it way more punk sounding than I could have done. :hobbes:
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PumpkinPieces wrote:Didn't see you post this here!

Glad you guys like it, one of my recorded tracks that I loved but never had any vocals for. It's awesome to hear it with devi's vocals, made it way more punk sounding than I could have done. :hobbes:


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devi ever wrote:
PumpkinPieces wrote:Didn't see you post this here!

Glad you guys like it, one of my recorded tracks that I loved but never had any vocals for. It's awesome to hear it with devi's vocals, made it way more punk sounding than I could have done. :hobbes:


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