Page 1 of 1
NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 3:37 am
by Ghost Hip
Alright so WaveForm was trying to get pose ideas for a nude photoshoot he's doing.... and I sketched one. And I got inspired to make a full drawing, but I've never drawn a woman, let alone a naked woman. so I tried anyways....
I used this pic for reference by Semyaza (hyperion artist) just to get a feel for the woman's body.
http://yhwh-semyaza.deviantart.com/art/ ... 2-92107207 I ended up with something a bit different though thankfully, but as you can see the hair and face have very similar features. I had trouble with the left (her left) nipple placement.... but as you can see its not finished.
so give me some feedback.

Just looking for tips and advice because I'm enjoying this so far.

Re: NSFW: So I need some criticism
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:05 pm
by smile_man
The titz are very well drawn, in all seriousness. I think it needs more depth, shade away!

If I ever make pedals could I use this as a graphic?
Re: NSFW: So I need some criticism
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 4:15 pm
by Ghost Hip
Haha sure, after the shading!

Re: NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:18 pm
by Ghost Hip
Alright updated.... the boobs are kind of.....awkward now that I've outlined them....hopefully I can fix that.
Re: NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:27 pm
by Mudfuzz
Hips and legs are a little awkward and flat, hand is a little small, lines need a little smoothing. But it looks like it's going to work out well so just keep tweaking.
Re: NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:30 pm
by Ghost Hip
Smile_min reminded me to point out she wearing a skirt, juts in case someone got the impression of whacky legs. Thanks for tips mud, the hand is a bit small.
Re: NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)
Posted: Wed Apr 15, 2009 11:44 pm
by metalmariachi
Agree with the hands, and the arm seems to taper to quickly.
Maybe if the wrap of the skirt went the opposite direction.
Nothing like changing your whole picture.
Great chat last night, just getting interesting when my cable went out.
Love spring rain storms.
MM
Re: NSFW: So I need some criticism (updated)
Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 12:28 am
by WaveForm3
Great start!
My baisc things have already been said... after the elbow, arm gets small, same with hand.
Nothin else, really.