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collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 10:19 am
by devi ever
Lemme know what you think so far :
Second take with full lyrics (after my voice was shot to hell)
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/deviever/after-the-first-ship-sinks-full-devi-scratch-vox[/soundcloud]
music by admiral apricot
vox / lyrics by devi ever
she's alive to
she's allowed you to
violate every orifice
but you choose to break her bones
abused, you
pretend to
believe in the two of us
because we fucked like no other
pretend all you want to
but you fucked up
make amends to all you wanted
cuz you fucked up
listen to the words I'm saying
your life is worth less than nothing
at all
nothing at all
- - -
she said bleed me all your flowers
with eyes inside the lies the lies the lies
kick apart these burning towers
made of sand, and cum, and blood, and tears, and the pieces of me I broke down for you all these years
and you can pretend all you want to
but you fucked up
make amends to all you wanted
cuz you fucked up
listen to the words I'm saying
your life is worth less than nothing
listen to the words I'm saying
your life is worth less than nothing
at all
nothing at all
Here's the first take with just first half of lyrics (before my voice was shot to hell)
[soundcloud]http://soundcloud.com/deviever/after-the-first-ship-sinks-deviscratchvox[/soundcloud]
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:47 am
by proroby
Sounds great, you got a great sound there.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:54 am
by jrmy
Raw & rocking! Nicely done.
I'd love to hear you two trade off vox sometime (not necessarily in this song, maybe in a later collab). I think your voices would be pretty badass together.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 12:58 pm
by theactionindex
Fuckin' Badass.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 1:32 pm
by devi ever
jrmy wrote:Raw & rocking! Nicely done.
I'd love to hear you two trade off vox sometime (not necessarily in this song, maybe in a later collab). I think your voices would be pretty badass together.
That is the plan. I'm hoping he likes what I did with this... just handed it off to me last night... WAKE UP FUCKER!
I think I'd probably drop just about anything I'm doing right now to be in a band with Jared.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 1:38 pm
by jrmy
devi ever wrote:I think I'd probably drop just about anything I'm doing right now to be in a band with Jared.
I have often felt that way as well, but I don't think he needs a bass player. At least you actually get to collaborate with him!
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:11 pm
by thrushes
DIG!
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 7:52 pm
by mauerkraut
Add noisey guitar soloing at end part of song.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 8:11 pm
by devi ever
mauerkraut wrote:Add noisey guitar soloing at end part of song.
Word. I plan on adding a third fuzzy guitar for leads and such.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:21 pm
by Trifarce
LIQUID AWESOME
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2010 8:00 pm
by delaydecay
this is cool. sexy lyrics
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 9:41 pm
by nad
I quite
this.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:37 pm
by Ghost Hip
Didn't see you post this here!
Glad you guys like it, one of my recorded tracks that I loved but never had any vocals for. It's awesome to hear it with devi's vocals, made it way more punk sounding than I could have done.
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Sat Jan 01, 2011 10:40 pm
by devi ever
PumpkinPieces wrote:Didn't see you post this here!
Glad you guys like it, one of my recorded tracks that I loved but never had any vocals for. It's awesome to hear it with devi's vocals, made it way more punk sounding than I could have done.
TOO PUNK TO DRUNK
Re: collaboration with pumpkins pieces... in progress...
Posted: Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:39 am
by proroby
devi ever wrote:PumpkinPieces wrote:Didn't see you post this here!
Glad you guys like it, one of my recorded tracks that I loved but never had any vocals for. It's awesome to hear it with devi's vocals, made it way more punk sounding than I could have done.
TOO PUNK TO DRUNK
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